From: Pacific Sun
Date: 01/05/2019 |
Wow. This is a story I could not put down. I was looking for something for the holidays. And did I find it! Your authorship, has an incredible sense of flow! Ease and natural language. The theme (perhaps) familiar to many fans, while adding yet another aspect to their friendship which fans of amateur fiction respect. Not self-serving (to the author) or lewd, but in keeping with the relationship that true fans understand. Economy of language/description. I liked the counterpoint of observation to literal action. I liked the definitive nature of the characters as portrayed. I am thankful that Fan Fiction writers like yourself, preserve the ongoing story that true fans keep in their mind. Thank you, for all the work that was required for this effort! And indeed, you made it seem effortless (which it wasn't)!!
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