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From: Pacific Sun
Date: 09/13/2017 |
Well written, completely enjoyable story! Concise, economic narration, which doesn't get in the way of the story. The setting and action is very visual. Especially enjoyed the interplay between NS & IK, as well as, the guest characters! Clever backstory for them! The story's premise is clean, believable. Action moves along smoothly. The kind of story you don't want to put down. Clever touches too (creative, purposeful). All in all, a very good read! Well done and thank you Benzadmiral!
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